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Dear Bob,
You wrote to me saying that you were dreaming of a special weekend away from the noisy city and tedious life.
I am wondering that a day' s tour to the countryside might be a good i-dea. My recommendation is that I accompany you to Lanshan Village for the weekend and we will be staying at Uncle Zhang's house. I've been there once and was amazed by the beautiful scenery there.
My plan goes like this. We can go for vegetable collection in the field in the morning, which we could breathe fresh air and get a great meal for lunch. Fishing is also fun, which we can go in the afternoon. There is a riv-er near where we live and it only takes us ten minutes on foot. If we are lucky, we could enjoy nice fish for supper. After supper, we can enjoy singing and dancing performed by countrymen
If you have anything particular in mind, please let me know.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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