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解析:Dear Jack，I’ll go to America for further study on April l5th，as the university has approved my application，which means I need to stay there for a year．Before that．I am supposed to arrive there next month since there will be a lot of stuff to get prepared．That is why l would ask you to do me a favor and help me find an apartment．A simple one with kitchen and bathroom will do．Thank you for your time．I am looking forward to seeing you there!
Li Min
【写作点金】
1．电子邮件形式和句子长度不要太单调，有时短句和长句相间显得
灵活。2．写作多用从句会使得句子更长，而且句式灵活。比如：I’ll go to America for further study on April l5th，as the university has approved my application．It means I need to stay there for a year.改为：I’ll go to America for further study on April l5th，as the university has approved my application，which means I need to stay there for a year．3．亲切、口语化的语言更加受欢迎，尤其用于这种朋友间的私人信件。例：A simple one with kitchen and bathroom will do．4．电子邮件应写得简单明了，便于阅读，太长的内容可以用附件的方式发出。一个段落大多由一到三个句子组成。
【高频词句】
further study 深造，进修
That is why… 这就是…的原因
do sb．a favor 帮助某人做某事t
ook forward to sth． 期待…
Li Min
【写作点金】
1．电子邮件形式和句子长度不要太单调，有时短句和长句相间显得
灵活。2．写作多用从句会使得句子更长，而且句式灵活。比如：I’ll go to America for further study on April l5th，as the university has approved my application．It means I need to stay there for a year.改为：I’ll go to America for further study on April l5th，as the university has approved my application，which means I need to stay there for a year．3．亲切、口语化的语言更加受欢迎，尤其用于这种朋友间的私人信件。例：A simple one with kitchen and bathroom will do．4．电子邮件应写得简单明了，便于阅读，太长的内容可以用附件的方式发出。一个段落大多由一到三个句子组成。
【高频词句】
further study 深造，进修
That is why… 这就是…的原因
do sb．a favor 帮助某人做某事t
ook forward to sth． 期待…