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解析:思路点拨
题目要求探讨教育到底是应该注重学术学习，还是应该注重音乐、体育等课程的学习。这种情况下，采用中立的写作方法最容易。
·在文章开头提出观点，即学校的教育应该使两者达到平衡。
·中间部分可以先论述学术学习的好处——提高专业素质，将来可以找到好工作，而且会为社会的发展多做贡献；再谈文学、艺术、体育这些课程能够给学生带来的好处——全面发展，有自己独立的思想。
·最后的结尾部分，重中自己的观点，教育应当在两者间取得平衡。
在本文的写作过程中，切忌说空话，要具体地论述两类学科的好处，在文章布局时这两部分的论述要保持平衡。
参考范文
On Function of Education
① What is the most significant factor in the shaping of the personality of a child? Do academic subjects really render everything necessary for children's all-round: development? ②Most schools put major emphasis on academic teaching because ③it is believed that academic subjects can guarantee better future careers. However, in fact, other subjects such as literature, music and sports are more crucial to children's development, for they can help cultivate their teamwork spirit, endurance, and improve their physical fitness.
④ It is true that academic subjects can provide children with some fundamental knowledge and it is with such knowledge that they can not only get further education and skills themselves, but also contribute to the economic development of our country. As a result, many parents consider academic excellence as the best and even the only way for their children to pursue better future careers. What is more, academic subjects are estimated to contribute more to the development of our society than subjects like literature, music and sports. However, as far as I am concerned, academic learning is like the fundamental structure of the architecture, which can only be improved and perfected by some other decorations. In other words, it is the supplementary subjects that play an essential role in children's development.
⑤Learning literature can make children sensitive to things around them and help them become careful observers; music can tell children how to relax themselves and gain inspirations through the power of it; sports can help build strong wills and bodies for children because they show them the spirit of endurance and teamwork. We know that all these qualities are desperately needed in children's future lives, especially when they get along or work with other people, or when they confront difficulties and obstacles, etc.
What our society needs are not people who know nothing but their textbooks, but those who know how to put into practice what they have learned, know how to appreciate and endure their lives，namely，people with full sensibilities and practical skills，which are not what we can expect from children who learn academic subjects only．
In conclusion，schools should balance between academic subjects and other ones，SO that we can expect new generations to．be all-round developed，well aware of the purpose of everything they are doing and contributable to the development of Our society both materially and spiritually．
范文点评
①以问句开篇，发人深省，耐人寻味。
②描述目前教育的现状，回应题目，引出主题。
③句型it is believed that…意为“人们认为…”，常常用来引出大众的观点。
④首先描述许多学校非常重视学术教育的现状及其原因，接着用一个转折句
However, as far as I am concerned…
引出作者的观点——除了要培养孩子对学术知识的热爱，还要培养孩子的团队合作精神、忍耐力、健康的体魄以及其他技能。
主题突出，条理清晰。
⑤通过阐述孩子学习文学、音乐、体育等课程的重要性来论证自己的观点。