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现代社会的节奏越来越快,人们的压力也越来越大。大家都有不同的减压方法,有人读书,有人进行体育锻炼,有人则选择修整自己的花园。题目要求考生谈谈自己认为哪些是最好的减压方法并展开论述。       
本文写作的难点在于,考生往往觉得只论证一个最好的减压方法难度很大,因为很难写够题目规定的400字。考生往往会一开始就说自己要采取什么方法,然后说明原因,这样就存在题目开得太小,不好写的问题。这篇文章可按照一般的议论文的思路去写,即提出问题——分析问题——解决问题。要注意,题目中说的是the bestways,而不是mebestway,即可以提出若干种减压方法,说说它们各自的好处。
本文的写作模板如下:
·开篇部分首先说明什么是压力。
中间部分可以先分析产生压力的原因,然后提出自己都有哪些压力,最后分别阐述如何释放自己的压力。
·最后概括:释放压力对身心都有好处。
参考范文
Reducing Stress
④Stress is one of our biggest enemies which affects our health,our personality.
and our relationshipS with others.In order to work better and maintain a good social
relationship,②it is very necessary for US to reduce stress and stay happy and healthy. But how to obtain this is a big problem for people nowadays.Many ways have been tried,while some see satisfactory effects,there are still others who suffer even more pressure.
⑨As far as I aln concerned,to find an effective approach to reducing stress.first and the most important thing is to identify the causes of stress,and then appropriate me mods can be worked out depending on these various causes.The most common tyr}es of stress face are with work,with friends,and with myself. Work’related stress is the easiest to combat.I simply stop working for a while.If  find my self picking up the SalTle piece of paper four times a day and never doing any thing with it,I blame stress.If I find myself staring at the computer without finishing a report,  blame stress.The best thing to do is to do something else.Sometimes,I get up from mv desk and go down the hall to talk to my colleagues,but I don’t talk about work.Related subjects.Other times,1 will take a short walk around the block and get some fresh air.Work-related stress can be cured by getting away from the work
Stress caused by friends is more difficult.Often the cause is more
complicated.My friends could have personal problems that cause anxiety to themselves,which makes me feel upset,too.or my friends could be angry at me or vice versa.Here,
I the cure for stress is talking about the problem and being with my friends.Unlike work,you Can't walk away your friends.
Stress caused by my selfis also not SO easy to get rid of.If I feel bothered by all exam or anxious about the future,there is very little for me to do.I just have to tell my self that Can only do my best and leave the rest up to fate.
④It is important to try to lead a stress—free life.If you call avoid stress by walking away from it(1ike at work),talking through it(1ike with your friends)or facing it head on(1ike with yourself),your health,personality and relationships will benefit.
   范文点评
①第一段分析了现状——现在人们都面临着不同的压力,有些人没有找到合适的途径来释放压力。
③it  is  very necessary for sb.to do sth.意为“对于某人来说做某事很有必要”。
③本段提出要认清压力产生的原因,不同的压力要采用不同的减压方法。此处作者提出自己有来自三方面的压力——工作、朋友和自己。
④本段总结全文,作者将前三段内容巧妙地进行概括,既突出了主题、强化了观点,又使文章条理清晰、结构紧凑。

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